Create a brief story that takes place within the context of your novel and describe it from another character's perspective. For example, is there a part in Hobbit that could be told through Bilbo's, Gandalf's, or a dwarf's eyes?
Be creative, descriptive, and tell the story in way which is true to your book.
In your comment post (below), please include the following:
1) First Name (and last initial, if necessary)
2) Title of Novel (Hobbit, Beowulf, Sir Gawain and the Green Knight)
3) Your Narrative Writing Paragraph
To view how you will be scored, click here for the rubric.
Callan
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Hobbit Narrative paragraph
“Hello, is anybody there?” said Bilbo. “Gandalf, Fili, Kili, Oin, Gloin, Thorin, are you there” He started to cry, and the sun started to set. He was still weeping when it was nighttime, and a goblin walked out of the cave holding a spear. He said in a scary, raspy voice, “is anybody there?” Bilbo said, “yes, but what does it matter to you now, after you’ve killed all my friends.” The goblin replied, “that is true, they are long gone dead, with no survivors.” Bilbo took of his ring and said, “just kill me, I’m already in more misery than I ever could be in.” So the goblin killed him, and that was the end of the Hobbit.
By Callan
GOODBYE HEAD
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Yaaaa! I yelled as I charged into the main hall. As I entered the first thing I saw was a huge mass of nights, ladies, and servants all gathered around a huge table. Everyone turned to look at me. I yelled to them. “I am the green knight and I shall make an offer for you” I told them to send their bravest knight over to cut my head off. Instead they sent forward some rinky-dink 3rd class knight named sir Gawain our something. I laid my head on the floor and got ready for the blow. He brought it down mightily and off went my head. I picked it up and yelled, “remember” “One year and one day later I will return the blow. Then I rode off into the night.
Dear Dori’s Diary,
ReplyDelete“What are we going to do? We are surrounded by hundreds of wild wolves!” I said.
“We just need to distract the wolves!” Gandalf exclaimed. “Oh no! Bilbo is still scuttling from tree to tree. We need to save him! Dori, go save him you’re the lowest!”
“No way! I’m going to be killed by the wolves”
“Quick, go save him”
“Fine,” I said. I thought, “Why did we even bring the stupid hobbit on this stupid trip”. I jumped down to the floor, and Bilbo jumped on my back. I boosted him, and then climbed into the tree. The Wargs almost killed me!
One I climbed back up, Gandalf lit a pinecone and threw it at the Wargs. The Wargs started running in circles, lighting each other on fire.
I thought, “We will be saved”.
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ReplyDeleteWhen I saw beowulf in the heart of the flames, i knew he was going to die. the dragon kept firing flames at his face. I stood there watching al hope drain from his face as the dragon clutched beowulf in his ginormas teeth. Without thinking i rushed at the dragon. together beowulf and i killed the mighty dragon. i cried out inn victory. but little did i know that poison was seeping in beowulfs veins. suddenly he callapsed. i fell down in beside him with hatred in my heart. g g go get the gold and bring it to me he said weakly. i did and gathered some golden pieces of treasure. I would trade all of this for bewulf to be alive. as i got back he said tell the others to build a barrow and call it beowulfs barrow. make it in memory of me. beowulf never lived long a note to say any more words because then i knew
ReplyDeletehe was dead.
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ReplyDeletehow do i find the rubrick
ReplyDelete‘’Hello my name is Beowulf and this is how I became a hero. First I was just a little boy wrestling with my friend Breca and we used to battle to see who was stronger and better at different things. Then I went my type of own way and I met the Spear Danes and they were being attacked by a horrible monster named Grendel. Grendel was terrorizing them and killing them. He was a horrible tall, green monster. Then one day I said I will battle the monster in the night. He came in and before I could see him he killed a man. Then we attacked him. He was dead because we killed him then we went to his cave and killed his mother we also battled and killed her. THE END
ReplyDeleteHe said go first.I thought of one of my best riddles.
ReplyDelete"What has roots that nobody sees, is taller than trees,up up it goes."
"And yet it never grows", I said. He correctly awnsered mountains.I was mad. I had to win.
Then he said "30 white horses on a red hill, First they champ, then they stamp, then they stay still." he said. I knew it chestnuts oh, teeth teeth
My narrative writing is in chapter 5 when the goulem confronts Bilbo. From Spencer Gunning.
ReplyDelete"I want to eat you." I said
"No go away, I am lost and do not need your dusty self near me,"
said Bilbo "actually, can you help me find my group?"
"yes, but for the price of that juicy arm of yours."
"Fine you want it, go get it."
He threw a stick and i went after it because it is so dark.
I then saw it was a mere stick. I turned around and my precious food was gone.
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ReplyDeleteA long, long time ago in the heart of the Misty Mountains, I Gollum was paddling around in my little boat on my little lake hunting for fish. I was running low on provisions; the sack of food was getting smaller each day. Then, along came a hobbit.
ReplyDelete"Who are you?" I asked
"I am Bilbo," replied the hobbit. "Will you show me the way out?"
"If you win this game of riddles sure, but if I win I will eat you." I said
We asked each other riddles; I was getting them all right. Then, just like that I lost. I went back to my island, guffawing anyway. My ring would still let me eat Bilbo. My ring was gone! The hobbit had found it. Sadly, he escaped with it and was gone.
Sophia D.
DeleteVocab: provisions and guffawing
Sir Gawin and the Green Knight
ReplyDeleteBy: Ava K
One day i the bravest knight of them all decided to go to a kingdom to see if one of their knights can face me.No sage of theirs will face me ,just ,an to man with a knight, and My name is the Green Knight.When i walked in this knight named Sir Gawin came up. i told him ifnhe strikes me , i get to strike him in the exact same spot but in one year.when he striked me in the neck, i took my head with my magicla powers and held it up with one hand.His contenace on his face was very suprising. I laughed. I got one my horse and yelled,
" See you in one year , Sir Gawin."
The wolves view of the dwarfs getting caught up in a tree.
ReplyDeleteIt was a full moon. My troop and I howled at it. We sensed something. We guessed it was the goblins late to our meeting. I ordered the troop to gather in a circle. Then we saw them, the tasty dwarfs, a hobbit, and a wizard in front of us up hiding in a tree. We watched the tiny hobbit on a dwarf’s back climbing into a tree. My fellow wolves tried to attack the dwarf but missed as he swung his leg up onto the tree. We attacked and jumped all around the trees they were in keeping them up there. We told the dwarfs that there would be goblins coming soon. One of them, the wizard was able to understand our yapping and yelling. He was getting deadly afraid you could tell.
“The goblins are coming soon!”
“Yea you don’t stand a chance!”
“Give up on it!”
As my friends were yelling at them the wizard grabbed a pine cone and lit it aflame. I joined in at the yapping because we knew the pinecone was useless against us. He then threw it down. It caught on a fur of a fellow wolf and burned him to death. That got us angry. He screamed at them as revenged. We cursed and swore at them. Then out of nowhere another pinecone came and cought on my nose. I was lucky enough to get it off. Many of us died because our fur got lit on fire and burned us.
hi
ReplyDeleteMy precious I sees a tasty morsel for my eating’s” I said, “Gollum sees him walk into the water. No, no, no he musts be dry for my eating’s” “Me thinks what is he?”
ReplyDelete“Don’t eat me”
“Gollum wants a competition in riddles my precious.”
“Yes, yes anything. If you win you can eat me, if I win you show me out. ” The stranger said.
“Ok if I go first”
“Up Up Up it goes taller than trees but nobody knows “
“Hmmmm… A mountain?”
“No! Yes, yes, yes, I gets to eat him.” I said
Five minutes later.
“I will roast him with garlic I is getting now. ”No, Noes he is gone!!!!!!!!”
It was dark in my little hut on the stony islandwhen i heard foot steps. I thought it was a goblin because they liked fish from down here.
ReplyDelete"lets go see what it iss my precious" "Golem-Golem"
I climbed into my boat and sailed to him
"What is it my precious"
"im bilbo baggins"
"Bagginses?"
"How about a riddle contest"
"If i win you show me the way out"
"and if i win i eat you."
Bilbo read the note and sat down on his favorite chair to ponder whether or not he should go on the adventure. He thought about his family. He took into consideration which side of his family he needed to stay true to.
ReplyDelete"Took or Baggins?" he thought to himself. He thought about all of the good things that came to the Bagginses who never went on adventures. He thought about the infamous name of the Tooks. Which one did he want to be most like?
"The Bagginses. I want to be a Baggins because Bagginses are respected." Bilbo reminded himself. He then skipped to his bookshelf, knowing he did the right thing, to pick up a book. He picked out his favorite one and plopped down to read all day long.
I was laying in my tunnel when I heard a big slam. I stood up, but I didn't move any further. There were footsteps coming from another area of the tunnel. I decided to walk towards the sound to find out what it was. I walked about seven steps before I saw a moving figure. It was walking and kept doing so until it saw me. It was small, and it was probably a dwarf. When it finally saw me, the creature gasped and stopped very suddenly.
ReplyDelete"Who are you?" it asked.
"I'm Gollum. Who are you?" I replied.
"I'm Bilbo Baggins. I'm a dwarf from Bag's End, if you know where that is," he said.
"Yes, I think I've heard of it. Now... Why are you here?" I asked.
"You see, this special wizard named Gandalf and I are friends. He told me to go on this journey and I've been travelling for quite a while and after some scary stuff I ended up here," Bilbo said.
"Oh... So you know Gandalf? Well, um, I don't think he's your friend. You see, he and I are actually planning to kill you and all your little dwarf friends. That's why he sent you on this journey that you could, and will, die on. Now that I've told you, I feel like you're going to tell everyone to hide, so I will have to kill you now," I explained.
The look on his face was very amusing. I couldn't tell wether he thought I was joking or if he should come up with a plan. I turned around to get my scythe. I thought he would find it preferable to die quickly. I turned around to kill him, but he was gone. And so was my special ring.
" Oh my precious is so hungry!" i said
ReplyDelete" yes, yes hungry!" my servants replied.
"Shhhh my precious i hear someone coming! maybe we can eat that it may be a little dwarf or even better a lost little goblin!"
"master, shhh they are even closer now! they right above the hole!" At that moment a little Hobbit tumbled down the ajar hole in the ceiling and was knocked out for about an hour. i sunk back into my pond until he woke up.
vocab: ajar
Delete"An intruder has come my precious, he has come to steal my birthday present. We mustn't let him do so. He is not like the others my precious, he is not a goblin." At that point poor gollum was very flummoxed.
ReplyDelete"We must go check on him, make sure he doesn't get to my birthday present." With that Gollum stepped into his boat and sped towards poor Bilbo Baggins.
- Sophia Noonan 6B
Vocab used flummoxed
DeleteMy name is Sir Bron Bron. I am Sir Gawain's half brother. I live in a cave and I want to get revenge on my bro. Long ago he left me in a cave to die and to rot. So as a way to get revenge I am going to try to behead him by luring him into my cave and there I am going to behead with my trusty knife The Dwayne. He is a double edged sword who will instantly kill anyone that it touches on impact. Today I am going to have a bunch of my servents come and tell him the to come to my cave. After I have him in my cave i will tie him up and kill him.
ReplyDelete"That clever hobbit. Getting away before I'd notice him, my precious.." I mumbled as I walk closer to the swampy area. The rocks were jagged and were in steps. The sounds of a rattle created an echo in the cave.
ReplyDelete" The gatesss! They musssst be opened!" I exit out of the cave. " Let my preciousss out of here!' I scamper out of the gate as fast as possible." Finally free!" I exclaim as walking across the parapet." Oh my precioussssssss the air! My lungssss. They burn!" I grab my throat and choke losing air.
" This human air is dangeroussss!" I run back to were I came from before. I stumble losing more and more air." Come my preciousss we might die together." I say in a whispering voice. The gate was a bit ajar but closing sooner.
I run faster and faster even though I needed air." Come! Wait don't clossssse the door!" I jump into the small crack and inhale." Thisssss air issss perfect, my preciousss!"
ajar and parapet
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ReplyDeleteHobbit
I didn't know what the "Baggins" was... Strange thing as it was. -Coughing- P-Precious was in the dirty clutches off it soon enough... I was afraid, scared for P-Precious. I made the wager to win Precious back, b-but I wondered what to do... Then me had it... I had to figure out what had been in the Baggins' pockets... I couldn't take it anymore... My Precious...
my name is gollem. I was in my cave when i heard someone walking. hello that person said; is anyone here? yes, i thought to myself, i have myself some dinner. then i found the man. he was short and had harry feet. he also had a cape. can you help me find my way out he said to me. sure i said; but only if you beat me in a riddle battle.
ReplyDeleteGrendle vs. Beowulf
ReplyDeleteGrendle, the evil green goblin, prepared to defeat Beowulf, the mighty hero. He sucker punched Beowulf from the side, and before long, whacked again. But Beowulf rose from his fall to comeback and take down his unworthy opponent, Grendle. The cycle continued until finally, Beowulf threw his last punch, and fell to the floor. He was dead.
Stella
ReplyDeleteThe Unexpected Party from Gandalf's point of view
Wednesday, the day I am meeting all the dwarves at Bilbo's house. I got dressed and picked up my tall staff and my pipe. I walked outside as I put on my tall floppy hat . When I had just reached the pathway, I stopped suddenly. I realized that I was supposed to pick up the dwarves with the names of Bobur, Bifur, Bofur, and of course, Thorin. With a sigh, I thumped my staff four times on the ground. I closed my eyes and felt myself being lifted off the ground. I appeared at Bobur, Bifur, and Bofur's side. We wished each other good morning. I told them we would be meeting Thorin. They closed their eyes as I thumped my staff on the ground ahn we were lifted off the ground. Instantly, we appeared at Thorin's side. We nodded to each other and we continued to walk along the path to Bilbo Baggins' house.
I walked up to the house and knocked on the door with my staff. A few minutes later, he opened the door. I saw that everyone else was already there. I was ready to go on the journey.
"Ouch, i hit my head!" said Bilbo.
ReplyDeleteAll the sudden I fell into a deep sleep, and awoke the next morning with Bilba shaking me and trying to wake me, to see if I was ok. Finally Bilba and I found our way out of the cave, into a forest. Bilba was collecting me berries to snack on for breakfast. We had to be careful though because there were many twigs and tree roots sticking out of the groud so that it was easy to trip.
" Oww! Bilbo! Stop! Wait up!" Bilba shouted
" I fell over a tree branch and can't get up! I think that I broke my ankle!"
Claire Beowulf
ReplyDelete-As Beowulf lay there in pain and strees, wiglaf knew he was dying. Beowulf within the last few minutes of his life he thought of all the great things he had done for his people but hoiw much there was to be done. Wiglaf stood there trying to comfort him in disbelif and sorrow. Beowulf sighed and looked at Wiglaf.
"Here you are a golden chain that i fought with for courage and strength i give this to you to rule our kingdom, I am trusting you to be wise and noble to all." said Beowulf and he slowly shut his eyes and that was it Wiglaf was king and Beowulf was dead a new kingdom had begun.
Beowulf
ReplyDeleteBy: Ava S. 12/6/14
One-Day Beowulf was going to the land of the Geets to save them from the monster. When Beowulf finally got there they welcomed him and give him a big feast. Then it was time Beowulf did not know what he was going up to.
He walked silence throw the forest then BOOM Grendel and his mom and dad jump out. Beowulf attacks Grenal first because he is the weak Beowulf killed him fast but that just mad his parents madder.
Beowulf had to take on both of the monster’s the fought and fought finally he ripped there arms out but before they died they killed him! When they found Beowulf and the monster’s died!
Dear Gollum’s Diary (by Katie T.)
ReplyDeleteI have had such a horrible and flummoxed birthday! It all started when I was admiring my birthday present on my rock in the middle of my homely swamp. Then I heard a noise that made me jump and shortly after that a hobbit by the name of Bilbo Baggins enter. He had apparently gotten himself lost in the cave of this pinnacle and was begging fro my help. After I refused and had gotten quite a good appetite I proposed that we play a riddle game. He set up some unfair rules but then we started to play. I had amazing riddles that I knew he didn’t know but some how he seemed to find an answer. Finally I was fed up with him some I devised a devious plan to just killed the hobbit with the help of my precious. Unfortunately the Hobbit guessed my plan and was quickly on his way leaving me mourning the loss of my precious. Somehow I can to the conclusion that I had lost my precious but the Hobbit had found it. I spent my whole afternoon trying to find the invisible hobbit but I quickly learned that he had already let the cave.
Sincerely,
Gollum
Maggie
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- My name is Wiglaf. I'm now running a village that was handed over to me by King Beowulf. King Beowulf was the greatest leader this world has ever seen. He had fought a dragon with me by his side. He had protected me when my shield broke into bits of fire. Beowulf did kill the dragon, but before the dragon died, his fangs had struck into his skin and was been blasted with flame. A great man had fallen that. He was a great leader, a friend to all, and a warrior. I looked at him, with sorrow, and brought him back to the lands. They medicals tried to fix him up with what they had, but that didn't help much. Beowulf looked at me weak, and with a soft voice said, "Take this." He handed me a golden collar "You are a brave and young kinsman, worthy enough to be king." "May this bring you good fortune for the rest of your days" I looked at the collar and then looked at him. Right there and then, his last breath was taken...
“I will fight” said Gawain. “I am less important than all of you, so I will fight for the power”. Sir Gawain and the Green night looked at each other.”You will regret this once you die” said the green knight. “We never know who will die this time.” Said Gawain. The green knight looked like he had an idea. He finally said. “Do you want to bet something on this?” Everyone thought that was a good idea. “Whoever wins gets each other’s kingdom” said Gawain. The fight began. The green knight grabbed Sir Gawain by the neck and killed him. With a big smile he said. “Everyone get out of here before I kill you all, this is all mine know thanks to your little friend”.
ReplyDeleteBilbo was in the tree scared for his life. So were all the others beside Gandalf. The Wargs were jumping up on the tree trying to eat them for supper. Gandalf was throwing flaming pinecones at the Wargs. Then All of a sudden they heard Gandalf scream.
ReplyDelete“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.”
Gandalf had fallen from the tree and, was being eaten by the Wargs. Then the Wargs got up the tree and, ate them all. That was how their adventure ended.
Gandalf’s Family Reunions
ReplyDeleteThe Hobbit
Josie Mahoney
Family Reunions. Aren’t they just a pain in the neck? You wouldn’t believe mine. Honestly, no believes me when tell these stories I have about my reunions. But I always remember these stories.
One year, my aunt baked some pudding for us. It was right before she came so she used magic to make it faster. When it was time for dessert, we all rushed to the dessert table. A lot of people piled her pudding onto their plates. My brother even told me “Oh Gandalf, you have to try this pudding. It’s heavenly.” But I didn’t. About an hour after everyone had dessert I knew what was coming. I heard moaning and groaning. People were holding their stomachs. All the bathrooms were full. It was the pudding that made my family sick. As you probably guessed, it didn’t go too well after that.
Another year, my grandfather and I put on a firework show for my family and some Hobbits living nearby. Everyone sat outside as we put the fireworks on. We usually did this every year. But this year didn’t go as planned. My grandfather lit one firework for the finale. Except this one wouldn’t shoot up in the sky and explode. This one exploded on the ground. Sparks flew everywhere. Everyone ran for cover. Some of the sparks caused a fire on the dry wheat that was nearby. That was quickly patted out, though. It was a disaster.
This year had to be by far the most embarrassing reunion. My Uncle Tiodde tried to put on a magic show for the little ones. “Hey Gandy,” he said to me before the show, clamping his hands on my shoulder. “Uh, I’ve told you Uncle Tiodde, I don’t like to be called Gandy. My name is Gandalf!” I said, annoyed. “Alright, whatever you say Gandy!” He said, taking his hand off my shoulder. I rolled my eyes. Then, my Uncle Tiodde hopped onto the stage. All the kids clapped their hands and cheered. “Hey, thank you, thank you,” my uncle said, gesturing to the crowd. “Today, I’m going to do a magic show!” He wiggled his fingers. All the kids clapped again. Some even tried some new spells that shot out confetti. “My first trick… will be to make it snow!” Everyone cheered this time. My uncle grabbed his staff and whirled it around. I suddenly tensed up. This was terrible technique. You are never supposed to whirl your staff in the air to make it snow. You’re supposed to slam the bottom of it on the ground and say a few words. But I didn’t say anything as he whirled his staff around like a maniac.
Just then, the lights when out. All the kids screamed. I saw some of my relatives try to make light. But I knew everyone was relying on me. My specialty was light. So I quickly mumbled a few words and a light appeared on the top of my staff. Everyone swarmed my staff and I like moths swarm to a light. Then, I mumbled a few other words which made the lanterns in the room go on. Everyone smiled and cheered.
I’ve realized over these times that I love my family for being them clumsy selves. They are the best things I have. And I love them.
ReplyDeleteHobbit Vivi C
The band of dwarves piled into the mountain cave. Thorin and Gandalf sat huddled in the corner, whispering. Fili and Kili soon had a fire going, and the dwarves huddled around them and ate. They sang songs and roasted their meal. All throughout, Thorin and Gandalf talked. Bilbo heard whispers like,
“...leave early in the morning…”
“...the best ponies and all of the provisions…”
“We will travel through Mirkwood…”
As night fell, the dwarves went to sleep. Bilbo was wide awake, however, because he was an insomniac. He knew that Thorin and Gandalf were leaving and going on the adventure on their own. Gandalf woke Thorin, and they raised to leave. Gandalf’s blunder was that he knew Bilbo was an insomniac, but forgot. Bilbo woke the other dwarves up, and they stopped Thorin and Gandalf.
The Hobbit information
ReplyDeleteThe Hobbit is a fictional book written by J.R.R Tolkien. It is about a Hobbit named Bilbo who goes on an adventure he was kind of forced into by 13 dwarves and a wizard named Gandalf. Their mission is to go to the Lonely Mountain far away, and plunder the dragon Smaug’s gold, and to kill him. In the book, they have many wild adventures, and in some of them it is so lucky that they manage to survive. In one chapter they are hiding up in 5 trees, and a pack of evil Wargs (evil, talking wolves who want to kill them) set fire to the trees, but luckily the Eagle King comes out and sends his minions to save them from dying. The Hobbit is a very famous book which is well known and popular.
Before Gandalf was born, his parents Gandalfo and Gandalfa were very famous wizards. They always left their door ajar because they thought everyone was welcome. When Gandalf was about to be born, his mom, Gandalfa died. This is why Gandalfo stopped being a wizard and living his life in sorrow. When Gandalf came into the land, his father died. Gandalf wanted to bring back the magic of his parents.
ReplyDeleteThe Hobbit chapter 5 (from Gollum’s perspective)
ReplyDeleteI live on an island in the middle of the lake, where no one ever goes. So you might be able to imagine how surprised I was when one day, I looked up and saw someone− a hobbit. I watched him for a while , and then decided to get into my boat and go to where he was sitting on the brink.
“Who are you?” he asked.
I said something to myself and he continued talking.
“I am Bilbo Baggins” he said. “I have lost everyone and I don’t know where I am”.
I decided to help Bilbo, but I wasn’t going to make this easy for him.
“I’ll show you the way out” I said. “If you can answer these riddles”.
“Very well” he replied, and I asked the first riddle.
A long time ago, I, the green knight, was the most powerful person in the world! I was ten feet tall and wore nothing but green. I wore green because it was my mom’s favorite color and I was on a journey to avenge her. A few years before, when I wasn't good at fighting yet, we went on a long walk through a bunch of kingdoms. When we got to Arthur's kingdom they looked at us as a threat. Arthur ordered his guards to charge and attack us. I got away, but my mother wasn't so lucky. She sacrificed herself to save me, and I was going to avenge my mother for that. I was so confident that I didn't think of the things that could go wrong. So I rode my horse into the castle and put my plan into action.
ReplyDelete"Excuse me everyone, don't worry I come in peace. I would like to joust."
So I explained that I wouldn't mind one of the soldiers striking at me, if I get to strike that back in one year. I got happy when Arthur volunteered, but then Gawain stepped up and I got frustrated. My plan had failed, but I still had a chance to kill a tiny little man. The little man stricken at me but was very weak, and I felt released. A year later, the man entered my green chapel to face his death, or so I thought. I got the sharpest blade I had and got ready to strike. As I was about to strike, I felt a pain in my chest; Gawain had stabbed me in the heart! I swayed back and forth before I fell to the ground never to wake up again. The one good thing about dying is that I got to be reunited with my mother again. All is happy and all is well.
-JRB
Dear Diary,
ReplyDeleteToday a pesky hobbit came. He challenged to a riddle off. If he one, I would lead him. If heses won, we could kill him.
The competition was going well. Weses had him stumped! But then he guffawed out!
“Time! Time!” He should have been flummoxed! He won by luck! But the next thing he said was ridiculous! What’s in his pocketses? Weses don’t know that!
Hesus won, but I couldn’t let him go! Then he disappeared! He stole our precious! Weses will find him, and weses will kill him.
D.S
ReplyDeleteSir Gawain kills the Green Knight
Sir Gawain is the main character here and is a loyal noble knight to the king Arthur the rightful king of the country of England. Then the green knight comes in and says he is the best knight and he challenges sir Gawain and then sir Gawain shoots him in the heart and then he was still alive so sir Gawain invited him for dinner. While the green knight wasn’t looking sir Gawain poured poison into the wine the green knight was drinking. After the dinner the green night started to go home but felt nauseous so sir Gawain volunteered to walk the green night home. While they were riding in their carriage home the green knight passed out.
Then when green knight woke up he was paralyzed and on the top of a sacrifice table all he could see was sir Gawain with a battle axe and a priest. Then the priest started to pray. Then sir Gawain swung and copped of the green nights head.
The end
Beoulf Dies
ReplyDeleteBeowulf was walking once he heard a "grrrr". He turned around and he saw WAFFLES! He started to scream for help but it was no use because waffles riped his chest open. Beowulf blead to death later that night. The next day Beowulf's men went looking for Beoulf. Once they found him waffles attacked them to and they died. waffles became the new grendel.
you must show me the way out bilbo said to gollum. Ok gollum said. let me go get some supplise. bilbo didnt think he was getting anything he thought he wasnt going to come back. gollum was going to go get the magic ring that bilbo had found when he woke up so he could eat him. gollum couldnt find it. blibo put th ring on and he became invisible but he didnt know that. when gollum came back and ran right past bilbo thats when he found it that the ring made him invisible.
ReplyDeleteHero of The Hobbit (Katie Taylor)
ReplyDeleteBilbo is the most courageous hero in The Hobbit. In the beginning of the book when the journey starts Bilbo has to deal with much displeasure, which he would not have to deal with if he was at home. On page 29 it states “… He splashed behind the others in a very muddy track…the rain had gotten into the dry clothes and into the food bags.” Also, Bilbo has to fight for himself in situations where he is alone. Once Bilbo had to fight off a large audacious spider. One page 169-170 explains Bilbo’s victory “Bilbo came at it before it could disappear and stuck it with his sword right in the eyes…until he killed it with another stroke.” Furthermore, Bilbo uses his resources very wisely. During the book Bilbo finds a magical ring that can make him disappear he uses this ring wisely and to help the dwarves. On page 171 it explains “ Also Bilbo had slipped on his ring before he started. That is why the spiders neither saw nor heard him coming.” Although Bilbo does sometimes get foiled he is a very strong hero in The Hobbit.
Hobbit isn't interesting. A reason that hobbit isn't interesting is that it uses too many long words. The long words make it confusing and then I skip through the book and not understand what is going on. A second reason is that the author makes to many obstacles and problems. For example, there are too many obstacles and problems. I do understand that some people like lots of violence and adventure, but I think there is too much. I think Hobbit is a confusing and difficult book for a sixth grader if you are not following along with an audio.
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ReplyDeleteIt was a peaceful day in Spear Danes; just two days after I fought Beowulf in the great hall known as Heriot, I barely escaped with my life. I’ve been hiding in my home in the swamp ever since then. “I’m getting restless” I said to myself “I need to get out of here.” I decided to go out tonight and gather food and recourses.
ReplyDeleteI went out later that night and travelled around the land of Spear Danes for a long time. Every time I found a cow or a sheep I would eat it, but there were not a lot of them tonight. I found a large cave entrance and decided to go in. After a while of walking, I arrived at a huge room full of gold with a bunch of other entrances to the cave. There was only a small hole in the ceiling for light, but the gold reflected the light all around the room. There was a huge sleeping red dragon on top of the gold pile. I decided to try and grab some of the gold and jewels from the pile. Sneakily I tiptoed over to the pile. I grabbed a handful of gold, then I saw a huge golden goblet incrusted with beautiful jewels of every color